the hair is ok

u need work on faces

haha okay thanks!

I need all the criticks I can get

same here

so i can punch them

lol yah!

nah critics are important, as ling as they're fair

yes! They may not be fair but they are good!

true true

haha I want to see your poem so bad.

not thought ogf visiiting my site? the link is on my profile, some are even in my timeline i've posted it before too

oh well sorry but is your poem that you were talking about on ther

no but one other that had is a favourate of my fans 'new world' is and my personal favourate 'cherry' is too

I checked it out and left comments!

i know

you left ONE comment

yah thats still a comment I love your peotry I am going to have to check it our later because I am doing school!

ok, i need lots of regular readers, so get more fans for me

okay!

wait can you get me the link on here that way I can help you out

realmskipper.wordpress.c...

okay

I got it posting on all my sites

hope you enjoy what you get I am not sure what you will get

better than nothing as long as its regular and positive

cute =)

HAHA! I guess it is!