She ripped apart your what?

im wondering the same thing

I think she meant her paper

Yup...saw it on FB.

PinkTink...don't take it as she is ripping you apart but as a learning experience to make the next one better. Papers were hard for me

too at times in college but it gets easier the more you do

angel1is right - PastorRay has been writing papers for two years or so now in his Ministry classes, and is now writing much better than he

used to. I used to have to actually help him write them - now he writes them and I just help him edit a little. The more you write, the

better you get!

Besides, the point of a comp class is to help you learn to write better, and this is only the first paper - you aren't supposed to be

great at it yet.

i have taken writing classes before...but its not the fact that I had mistakes. she didn't like how I wrote it

what was the subject?

it was a narrative essay

narrative essay about an experience in your life and had to include some dialogue

I spent 5 days working on my first draft, I printed it and revised it twice over the weekend.

i have to start revising....and then calm down and revise again

the professor marked just a couple grammar errors and suggested a few things, but over all just said I had a well written first draft

and she is looking forward to the revisions!

ur lucky

luck has nothing to do with it, i stuck a lot of time and effort and it paid off

yea

I am sure that you will work it all out and after the weekend have an awesome essay revised and it will be all good!

yea I hope