CAN I READ

LOL, sure! I'll type it out since I scribbled around the pages

AA YAY

YESSS SHOW SHOW

IT'S SO GOOD OMG

Got shivers

You've got such pretty prose and for being so short it's really emotive

HELP THANK YOU😭

Is there anything I should improve?

In the third paragraph I think there's a mistake 'to hear inside' is that a typo or? Also typo on bullet. The only other thing I'd mention is the last line feels a bit abrupt it might be better to have him mumble 'it's cold' or mention how the little snowflake numbed his hand to put more emphasis on the cyclical nature of the story

LOL, yeah those are typos😭 wrote hear instead of head. And thanks for the advice!!

Nppp I love your style I'd love to see more when you write it!!

SO GOOD

Thanks guys😭

I only have one other story written somewhere. The rest are in notebooks that have either been thrown away or gotten lost

I want my stories that I wrote in our February writing challenge back 😭 I left the book before I saved any of the stories I wrote

I forgot we ever did that omg😭 I can send you screenshots!! Or delete the book entirely

I LOVE ITT

TYSM <3

Terimeri: Can you copy and paste them onto q journals?? If not screenshots are great pls!!

Of course!! I'll get to it when I get home

Tysmm

Wait issy, are you sure you'd like me to publish it on q journals?

Yeah sure idm

They were public anyways

Okay, but be warned. I found out through my friend that he'd been going through my and my friends' posts using new alts

Grim 😬

Well he's already seen them so that's alright but if I find out he follows me on plurk I'm going to tweak out

God I hope not

He needs to stay in his lane. He's pulled more shit ever since everyone dropped him

😭😭

founderymir I copy pasted them wll

all

Tysmmm

np!!