oh man me too

what are you trying to do

Shmoo?

i guess write ~~letters to the authors of the two stories we are workshopping today

talking about the STRENGTHS AND WEAKNESSES OF THEIR WRITING

ohhhhh _____@

and i'm like

I DON'T LIKE YOUR WRITING BECAUSE I AM IRRATIONALLY IRRITATED BY THE WAY YOU PUNCTUATE DIALOGUE ERRONEOUSLY

ALSO YOUR METAPHORS AREN'T FLOWERY ENOUGH

GO AWAY.

fgkjhdfg

...

Ohhh yeahhh

I know how that goes

I typically try to balance it out by pointing out some good aspects before going into the parts that bug me?

haha yeah and i mean it's not really so much about me being hypercritical

i know how to ... soften that

but

I seriously don't get it when people fuck up repeatedly on dialogue punctuation. HAVE YOU PEOPLE NEVER READ A BOOK IN YOUR LIFE?

i just don't like writing this stuff

HAHA YEAH

I ALWAYS ... GET A LITTLE ...

i mean

Understandable

it's not really fair of me to think that way because there are all kinds of reasons for people to not pick up on xyz pattern

just because they have read a lot of books!!

but

the irritation persists.

Yeah...