like the urgency of a river love was being handed to me with everyone my kindness was able to touch. I was soon Engulfed in an outragous amount of love.

I like this

I'm in need of some advice

right off I see this as two different poems or two incomplete stanzas of a much bigger piece. The brake between being at "when love was..." I personally would like to see it as part of bigger piece.

just my own thoughts there. I want see what you do with it.

Thank you soo much! That's great!

you are welcome