Where a lot of stuff happens, yep! (also hi, Lexi linked me your app to look over )

Hey.

What do you think?

Canon background needs to be expanded on, it's really short.

Well, it's basically the whole story

Network sample should be longer and likely woul dbe better to be directly addressing the network or more clear that it's for the network.

i did fix that

Good good. I hadn't reloaded or anything.

i can't imagine him posting more than four lines before waiting for a response

and re: the background: POssibly going a bit more into specifics of what happened and Near's involvement?

okay.

I don't see why they're necessary, but okau.

Sadly, most of what I know of DN is a partial read and lots of RP so I'm afraid I can't be too more specific on that part of it.

Linking the Death Note wiki in the background section would be a good idea! I think you're actually encouraged to

It might not be! Just a general thing.

Yeah, a link, if it's allowed, would help.

I know some mods are just stickers for background.

Have you looked over Lexi's app for pointers too?

that's actually

about as much detail as the DN wiki goes into

..welp.

You might be fine then

It doesn't really list the subplots with Mello

in his article

I will add some though