Any feedback is appreciated.

And maybe you can see the areas I've circled that I think I'll work tweak a little more.

it's weird that I have two FR plurks right next to each other that start with "Now that my internet's back..."

dandywonderous: We're sisters, so it can't be helped. XD

In the same house, too.

OH I didn't realize you guys were sisters.

It made me laugh that the wording was exactly the same though lol.

dandywonderous: Haha, yeah. I totally copied her wording because I was like CONTINUITY