from the first freaking line

I swear I've read an excerpt of that in a different book

I think I saw this on AO3 once

oh my

published fuck or die

with enemies to lovers

why did they have to use the name Xander

ikr, ahahaha. this is going to be terrible, and I love it

oh my goooood

how do these things get published

Read it and gives us the play by play

I just might

what's the title?

corvia: The Ultimatum, by Susan Kearney

oooh thank you!

so there's four in the series.

oops

lemme guess, we grabbed 4?

#3

but they seem to be standalones

well that's good at least

apparently it's terrible XD

she's 10 pages in and going "so many grammatical errors and typos, I can't even"

I'm not sure who to blame more; the publisher for letting it through in this state, or the author for not at least getting someone with two brain cells to proofread for her

the concept is semi-original; a species where the women go through a stage of life that requires them to have sex and bond with a male, and main character is a scientist who's working on a way to change that

but the actual writing is. not the best so far

honestly it sounds like it was written by an incel...

since the woman ends up with a man anyway

the fact that she's trying to change it feels more like the person threw taht in to satisfy the 'femoids'

true, but. it is a paranormal 'romance' so

I'm not too surprised that she probably ends up with him

fair, lol

the idea could have promise, if handled and done well. but judging by the first eight pages, I'm guessing it won't be. guess I'll find out? XD

the question is.... how many pages before the spelling and grammar have you literally throwing the book across the room