1). The song referenced in the title is named Samba de Orly, written by Chico Buarque and released in 1970, during a time of political persecution in Brazil. Buarque, an artist who was very vocal about being against the dictatorship, was exiled to Europe and named the song after Orly Airport in Paris, the destination for many exiled artists.

1) Even though the context wasn’t needed, it’s still odd that the TW translation took Marcel’s line out of the dialogue. It went from the original “want me to sing Samba de Orly for you?” To a vague “want me to sing it?”. So even if readers wanted to search up the song, they wouldn’t be able to because the lyrics weren’t even left in their original language?

2). As I said, the context of Samba de Orly doesn’t fit with the romantic dancing. That’s fine, 10 Dance does it all the time. What I don’t understand is why both the US and TW versions would translate this from the original Brazilian Portuguese.

I can make a pass for the US version since they added a translator’s note, but the TW version most definitely entered the text through a machine translator. Again, this makes it very hard for readers to find the song if they wanted.

3). I’m being nitpicky since the English translation has been an offender of this, but... you couldn’t have make it look nicer..?

Closing thoughts: I’m overall very satisfied with both translated versions of 10 Dance, but this puzzles me to no end. Samba de Orly is a beautiful song and deserves to be credited in the pages of the chapter, and it really didn’t have to be translated.

And yeah I wrote this rant solely because I’m utterly obsessed with this song

Finally, here’s Chico Buarque’s “Samba de Orly” from his Construçào album (1970): Samba De Orly

Further reading on Samba de Orly: Samba de Orly – Lyrical Brazil

Yes, I would love to know which song they were singing while dancing (look at those lyrics floating in the frame！) but didn't find it in dialouges. Never thought it was a translation discrepancy

insomniacocoon: I never would’ve discovered one of my favorite songs of all time if Inouesatoh translated the lyrics/didn’t mention the title! It’s a fantastic song, I’d love to edit the pages with the music (also feel free to reply in Chinese lmao, my Chinese is shit but I can still read it hahah)

It's the kind of song that makes you dance and swing, like a power to drive the body💃🏻

Sambas do that to you , and the chords are arranged in such a unique way, it becomes so melancholy when paired with the lyrics...

在这个场景里，唱歌的大叔是出生于巴西的法国人，铃木是出生于古巴的日本人，杉木大部分都人生都在英国度过，对于他们而言“流离故土”或“思乡”这个话题很微妙，对吧？不过，我更倾向于认为井上老师是被BossaNova爵士乐浪漫奔放又热情洋溢的听感给骗了🤣 她之前也曾经误以为estrellita是首苦闷的曲子吧

經你一提去仔細看中文版……實在太有趣了！譯者放上來的英文也不是葡文直翻。因為拿葡萄牙文丟google，葡文的內容明顯比中文版的英文短很多。我猜翻譯應該不懂葡文，去找了英文翻譯的歌詞來用。我也贊成保留原文歌詞，看不懂的人自己會去找。

至於歌名被拿掉，應該是因為排版的關係。要把Samba de Orly整串字轉90度才能和台詞一起塞進對話框。不知道是翻譯的問題或是編輯該負責的地方。

日文版裡面，在蘭姆酒端上來那格的左上角，老師有把歌曲的詳細資料放上去。可惜中文版的沒有把這個註腳保留下來，如果有就不會找不到歌了。英文版也沒有這個註腳，但是它最後有翻譯的註解所以沒問題。可惜中文漫畫似乎沒給譯者這麼大的空間去發揮。

看過這首歌詞，再回去看它給古巴裔法國人唱，覺得老師的安排好神。先前沒注意過鈴木先生哼歌lalala的時候是忘詞。忘詞還是繼續哼唱給杉木先生聽，這種關係好甜啊。還是覺得忘詞就會停下來的我太東方了呢。

kniomi: 台詞同時有中英文的確會比較麻煩，但第6話的Fly Me To The Moon是有被留住的。會不會是因為這首比較有名呢⋯？

kniomi: 雜誌裡連載的版本好像有寫出歌名和作者，我是靠那個才找到的。單行本把字刪掉了但至少曲名還留著^_^
鈴木第一本裡這首歌唱了了兩次，看來應該很喜歡這首歌吧哈哈

insomniacocoon: 井上有可能是因為這個才選這首歌曲吧，Marcel是巴西人這個細節應該也不是巧合。不去特別找歌詞的話還真的會以為是首快樂的曲子哈哈。
說到Estrellita，原文的歌詞其實是有點憂鬱感傷的，有興趣的話有英文翻譯： Alfredo Kraus - Estrellita lyrics + English translat...

chlorine_tangerine: OK 感谢指路😘

葡萄牙文有個字，同時具有快樂和悲傷兩種涵義。這首曲子很適合這個解釋。

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中文版的日文翻譯漫畫，裡面寫的英文怪怪的，然後這段話在日文原作裡面是葡萄牙文。多文化碰撞出來的違和感真是迷人。有點像是調酒，混合了各種各樣的東西，可能不好喝但是絕對有趣。

巴西裔的法國人為兩個日本人彈唱，一個是古巴出生一個在英國成長。一首曲子三個人，幾乎把世界繞了一整圈。